Gypsy (Blogophilia 32.5)
Gypsy woman
Looks deep
Into the woman's eyes
Saying nothing.
Is it real?
Or the image
Of tea leaves,
Spoonful of sugar?
The image of a train
Appears to the woman.
"All Aboard!
The conductor intones.
Which way does it go?
Ecstasy or tears?
Love or hate?
To tell the truth
it is unknown.
Gypsy fades from sight
As she climbs aboard
To another world,
Another life.
Like it! the train of life - or death
ReplyDeleteAnd the Gypsy can't say where it will go.
DeleteMysterious and intriquing! 8 points Earthling! :)
ReplyDeleteMarvin
oh i like this, it's like death but not sorrowful.
ReplyDeleteClare
This is what I was thinking as I was writing it.
Deletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uoEUwljiHv4&feature=colike
Risk big to win big - not sure I would have had the courage to step on
ReplyDeleteTM
Ah, this is just wonderful! So true, with every life change and decision there is a certain amount of risk. I just love the direction you took this week, and that you wrote a poem to boot!!! :D
ReplyDeleteThe original idea was a story, but I just couldn't get it to jell. So, I fell back to four line stanzas.
DeleteBeautifully rendered...
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful direction to have gone :) xo
I really liked this one. Kind of mysterious.
ReplyDeletecool
ReplyDeletewhat a great finish Christopher ... it leaves more questions than answers... loved it pal...
ReplyDeleteDarn these gypsies are prolific this week. Yours is especially cryptic. I like it!
ReplyDeleteIt's the tea leaves. They are supposed to be bearers of the future.
DeleteKind of fun, though.
It speaks volumes. Great write.
ReplyDelete--DJ