So, here she was at Manuel’s, her usual fifteen minutes early. A quick glance to make sure the lipstick line was still straight. Satisfied, the compact disappeared into the leather purse. Kari hadn’t been this nervous meeting anyone in quite a long time. But then, it had been at least 20 years since she had been on a blind date. What will he look like? All Mary told her was he was a bachelor with a paying job and no kids. Nothing about how old, or whether he was a slob or a crackhead. Not even the guy’s name. Only that she thought Kari would enjoy his company. Just be at there at 5:30. Sipping on her gimlet, it seemed like she had never left. The Musak was mostly Sinatra and the political types still hung to their tables like they were still in high school. Tony, the manager, gave her a peck when he saw her and said she could come back to work any time. No. She’d had enough of slinging swill and dealing with the obnoxious, of stepping over the hoo
No commitment doesn't really equal no pain, although I'm sure some people believe it does.
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A different kind of pain, really. Kind of like the psychology course rats who keep pressing the button for pain/pleasure.
DeleteAmber Lynn- Wow. Great visuals here, really enjoyed this piece.
ReplyDeletemakes you visualise Christopher..
ReplyDeletethe guy alone in the dark..
wanting to commit to a relationship without really wanting any commitment..
using porn to have a relationship with the flickering scenes on the screen but dropping one scene to get another.. always looking for another hit to satisfy his desire!
brilliant ....
And never finding that one hit. A form of chasing the dragon.
DeleteStark, brilliant imagery Christopher! And I must say a fabulous twist on this week's prompts. :D
ReplyDeleteYour surprised me with this direction. But perfume can do that
ReplyDeleteCalvin Klein is always a good place to start.
Deletewell done!
ReplyDeletejay
you have been reading my diary again...8 points Earthling! :)
ReplyDeleteMarvin
Yes, I have. Please be careful with the Illudium Pu38 modulator. You could destroy the world.
DeleteNo wonder there are so many lonely females in the world... I found this sad & poignant.
ReplyDeleteSharonlee
Awesome piece...enjoyed reading!
ReplyDeleteNeed I say more? But definitely most unique take on the topic!
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