Monday, January 16, 2012

Whisper (Blogophilia 47.4)


Whisper down the lane
Like the warm summer breeze
She left two days ago
Left you high and dry
Only the clothes on you back.

To hell with her, you say
As the motel sleepers
Make you wish you were one, too
As you whisper down the lane.  

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Topic-Colleen Breuning Keller
Brad Pit Movie-Leta Violeta
To,Too, Two-Barbara K.

Pic-Joannie
Pic Guess-Blue Lagoon, I won, cold fish, Pot,

17 comments:

  1. nice poem

    blogspot?

    so if yu comment back I won't see it and may I make a suggestion that people can select profile with name and website. Most of my writing group uses blog spot and if I can profile with name and website it's easier

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    1. I'll see what I can do. I thought I said Blogger.

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  2. If it happened to me,I say to hell with the rumor-mongers as well.

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  3. very nicely written.

    thanks for stopping by my post and commenting. i look forward to following you, and reading more.

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    1. Thank you for stopping by. I will be loading older stuff as well as newer pieces over the next few weeks.

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  4. Sounds like she done him wrong. Nicely written.

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    1. She did. I could probably expand this out to a country song.

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  5. Ah, this is Sallon and that is my comment above.

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  6. Marvin Martian here! I quite agree... to hell with her!!
    8 points, Earthling!! :D

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  7. some ladies have that knack.

    -Chazz

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  8. Joanie thinks he is better off without her! Good riddance!

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  9. great read Christopher... speaks volumes... I enjoy the thoughts it provokes.... brilliant!!

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  10. up's .. just to explain... its Trevor Clower here... myspace's name won't mean too much to you ... lol

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    1. I recognize you.

      This is going to be an adjustment period as I ramp this thing into production.

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  11. Leta here :)

    Loved this. Sorry so late reading... just making my rounds and catching up.

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