Tick









Tick…
The spring winds down slowly
No one to reset
No one to rewind

Tick…
No one to see
The fracture in the spline

Tick…
As we go
The slack grows
Until the tick
Pulls no more.

Comments

  1. AlanaJanuary 27, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    Very evocative read Christopher. Well done.

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  2. Mojo WritinJanuary 27, 2012 at 6:53 PM

    That made me unutterably sad. Beautifully done.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 27, 2012 at 8:19 PM

    I sat for a moment after reading. Just sat. Few things make me do that, but I love it when it happens.

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  4. k~January 27, 2012 at 9:12 PM

    Very nicely done!

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  5. JoJanuary 27, 2012 at 9:18 PM

    That is so final. Just like out own time. I really appreciate the talent and the soul behind this, but I can't say I enjoyed it, it made me feel heavy.
    Excellent.

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  6. Claudia MoserJanuary 28, 2012 at 2:12 AM

    Very deep!

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  7. danneromeroJanuary 28, 2012 at 11:15 AM

    nice.

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  8. Beverly DiehlJanuary 30, 2012 at 6:45 PM

    Love the photo you used, suits the unfinished feel the poem leaves me with.

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