Monday, April 22, 2013

Embraced (Blogophilia 9.6)

Ideas
Flying
Into the ether

Only thing
Left is
A hard shell

Time stands
still as
I wonder

Can it
Bring me
to life now

Slippers
Of Glass
Siding off

Her feet
As we
Lie embraced


 

17 comments:

  1. First! I'm loving the footloose, fancy free feel of this.... I have a feeling it will bring you to life! :)

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    1. Better than staring at pension spreadsheets. :)

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  2. The screen play has at least 2 flash backs maybe. Is that what the pic looks like? A park bench? Those song titles surely do lend to romance

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    1. At first, I thought it was a garden bench. Now it looks more like a Victorian loveseat.

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  3. This could go on all night... if you are lucky.

    signed: Myke

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    1. Which is where the flashback would have come in.

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  4. :) Romantic!
    8 points Earthling! :)
    Marvin

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  5. Such tight verse! excellent... David II

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    1. It flowed out this way.

      Didn't we call this Easy Rog?

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  6. Poignant and Surreal, flows like silk.

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    1. When I was drafting it, all felt was 2-2-3, 2-2-3.

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  7. Wonderful piece! :)

    DJ (AKA Diana Jillian)

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