Embraced (Blogophilia 9.6)
Ideas
Flying
Into the ether
Only thing
Left is
A hard shell
Time stands
still as
I wonder
Can it
Bring me
to life now
Slippers
Of Glass
Siding off
Her feet
As we
Lie embraced
Flying
Into the ether
Only thing
Left is
A hard shell
Time stands
still as
I wonder
Can it
Bring me
to life now
Slippers
Of Glass
Siding off
Her feet
As we
Lie embraced
First! I'm loving the footloose, fancy free feel of this.... I have a feeling it will bring you to life! :)
ReplyDeleteBetter than staring at pension spreadsheets. :)
DeleteThe screen play has at least 2 flash backs maybe. Is that what the pic looks like? A park bench? Those song titles surely do lend to romance
ReplyDeleteAt first, I thought it was a garden bench. Now it looks more like a Victorian loveseat.
DeleteThis could go on all night... if you are lucky.
ReplyDeletesigned: Myke
Which is where the flashback would have come in.
Delete:) Romantic!
ReplyDelete8 points Earthling! :)
Marvin
ReplyDeleteLiving Large
TM
Gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteSuch tight verse! excellent... David II
ReplyDeleteIt flowed out this way.
DeleteDidn't we call this Easy Rog?
Poignant and Surreal, flows like silk.
ReplyDeleteWhen I was drafting it, all felt was 2-2-3, 2-2-3.
DeleteWonderful piece! :)
ReplyDeleteDJ (AKA Diana Jillian)