Tailights (Blogophilia 50.7)
The crimson taillights of rush hour snaked slowly up the
freeway. Outlines of warehouses and cheap stores were lit by scarlet remains of the day.
Silence in the car was broken only by random squawks, routing units to small
dramas around the county. The oppressive tension, as each man
pondered what they had seen.
Finally
Gomez broke the silence
“So, what were we watching back there?”
“Not really sure. Maybe a rehearsal for something?” Murray
jerked the wheel to get around a particularly slow sedan.
“Yeah, that was kind of what I was thinking, a waltz with an
invisible partner.”
“More like the Masochism Tango.”
Laughter broke the tension.
“Yeah, he looks like that four-eyed geek.” Gomez took a sip
of his soda. “I used to listen to him when I was a kid.”
“Do you think he saw us?” Murray scratched along the edge of
his bald spot.
“I doubt it. He looked like he was possessed.” Gomez turned
down the radio. “Like that old show, ‘Outer Limits.’ Remember how it used to come
on and say that they controlled your TV? I think our boy there was controlled
by some outside force.”
Traffic slowed as they approached the 316 exit. Two cruisers
were on the shoulder. Three cars were lined up like ducklings in various stages
of damage. Just a simple damage claim and everyone had to watch.
“Yeah, kind of like what we have now. ‘Oooh, look at the pretty blue
and red lights.’”
Murray tapped the horn and went around the car in front of
him. The other driver responded with his middle finger. He opened his mouth to say something, but was
interrupted with the ring of his phone.
“Lt. Murray…Yeah?” He motioned to Gomez for a pen.
“Give me
the name” He wrote while keeping one eye on the car in front of him. “Sandra
Walker... Address?...Where is that?... Atlanta? OK… Yeah, Cap, we just saw Allen
as we were leaving the Torres notification...No, I still don’t think he’s
involved in the hookers, but I am wondering if he isn’t planning something to
piggyback on them...We’re on our way back, we’ll call her and see if it is worth
pursuing. See ya in a few.” He clicked
off
“What was that about?”
“Some Psychic lady down in the City just called in to
Crimestoppers. Said our boy Jeremy was planning some kind of revenge.”
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Topic-Dave Raider
Pic-Lika Scaliente
Pic guesses: Ducklings (in blog), Lakeside, Picnic,
I enjoy your Murray & Gomez stories! Great dialogue, too!
ReplyDeleteIrene
As always your writing is stand out. I had to go back and catch up a bit. Cool story.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you are enjoying it.
DeleteNicely written Christopher :)
ReplyDelete~Christine W
Ah it seems the cat is struggling to get out of the bag!
ReplyDeleteThe spotlight is swinging towards Jeremy
8 points Earthling! :)
Marvin
It never seems he can get a break, right?
DeleteJeremy is starting to receive unwanted attention...hopefully for his sake that Murray and Gomez focus gets put back on the investigation of the murders and he gets put on their back burner...This story is going strong and I am really intrigued by your writing!
ReplyDeleteWe'll see...
DeleteHa... the psychic lady is a twist... awesome chapter. - Dave Raider
ReplyDeleteGood story.
ReplyDelete~~Diana