Monkey Business (Blogophilia 52.7)
As Murray
left the small house, he thought to himself. The woman was an enigma. She would interesting to him if he had been single. The psychic crap never
did much for him, but her energy was unmistakable.
The
interview went well enough. Ms. Walker described how Allen had called for an
appointment. She had worked with him when he first got out of Georgia Regional,
but it had been about a year since she had last seen him. She had some errands
to run, so set the appointment for after dinner. She was finishing up her Moo Goo Gai Pan when
he got there. She cleaned up and went out to meet him.
From her
earlier sessions, she knew he was schizophrenic.That wasn't uncommon among her clients. But th figure that met her had given pause. The face reminded her of
Hercules after slaying the Hydra. His scent, sweat, exhaustion combined with the drivers
of Hades, filled the room. The purpose of the meeting was to slow everything to
focus, she knew that. Tea and small talk made him comfortable and relaxed where they could
work. She went on to explain that most of the benefit from alternate
spirituality is in participant’s head.
Psychiatry by another name still smelled like
bullshit, to Murray. But, who was he to judge?
The session
had gone pretty smoothly until she noticed him looking the picture of the
Castle. What had she called it? The Shiver of the Scythe? A Grim Reaper
reference, Murray knew. Allen kept
talking about unfinished business and how Vlad the Impaler never used cheap
tricks on his enemies, ones that didn’t last. No, tricks and events he used were
permanent and so were the ones Allen planned. She quickly ran through the
reading to get him out of there. Afterward he left; she saw case file online
and couldn’t sleep.
When he got
back to headquarters, he was met with a mini conference that had congregated at
his desk. Gomez, Jackson, Cap and two other detectives with frowns and crossed
arms were waiting. What now? Jackson
waived him over, pointing at his computer screen.
Monkey
Has a friend
He wants to play
Today is your day.
Detached
words floating across the screen under the picture of a small chimp pointing a
Glock at an unknown target. Murray’s eyes grew wide at the image.
“Dagnabit! When
did THAT come in?” Murray asked.
“About
fifteen minutes ago.” Jackson took a slug out a water bottle. “We all got a
copy”
“Any idea
who might have…” Murray broke off. “Never mind, I can guess.”
Captain
Hudgins broke in “He’s upping his game. Allen must think we are stupid.”
“But, can we
tie this to him?” Murray, turned to one of the other detectives. “See if
Computer Forensics can to an IP search on this. Allen isn’t dumb, he probably
knows how to hide his tracks, but it would be worth it to see if he originating
computer was local.”
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Topic_Christine Wichman
Pic_Stephen Lee
Pic Guesses- Little friend (in blog), Bang, Fred J. Mugged, Smart? Monkey Business (in blog),
great way to work the prompts into the story... now what is this new monkey business all about
ReplyDeleteHmm, I wouldn't have expected Jeremy to monkey around and give any indication of his intentions! This is an interesting tactic on his part and kind of puts Murray on his guard! Great addition!
ReplyDeleteYeah, telegraphing your punches are generally not a good idea.
DeleteInteresting!
ReplyDeleteIrene
So very creative. Great storytelling.
ReplyDeleteI try.
DeleteOoh! Messing with the coppers heads might not be wise....but it would be gratifying!
ReplyDelete8 points Earthling! :)
Marvin
Wouldn't it, though.
DeleteMonkey has got his number...better watch his back. Great story!
ReplyDeleteDemme ;-)
Yes, he does.
DeleteGreat episode Christopher...and I love how you included the chimp pic so seamlessly into the story!
ReplyDelete~Christine W
Great episode Christopher...and I love how you included the chimp pic so seamlessly into the story!
ReplyDelete~Christine W
Now the guy is monkeying around challenging the cops..He'd better be aware, cops are not as dumb as he thinks
ReplyDeleteStormy
He's so into his plan, he can see outside the blinders.
DeleteWow! It seems like the challenges were made for this episode of your story. No monkeying around with the cops! Fantastic writing. -Leta
ReplyDeleteNice Write! :)
ReplyDelete~~Diana