So, here she was at Manuel’s, her usual fifteen minutes early. A quick glance to make sure the lipstick line was still straight. Satisfied, the compact disappeared into the leather purse. Kari hadn’t been this nervous meeting anyone in quite a long time. But then, it had been at least 20 years since she had been on a blind date. What will he look like? All Mary told her was he was a bachelor with a paying job and no kids. Nothing about how old, or whether he was a slob or a crackhead. Not even the guy’s name. Only that she thought Kari would enjoy his company. Just be at there at 5:30. Sipping on her gimlet, it seemed like she had never left. The Musak was mostly Sinatra and the political types still hung to their tables like they were still in high school. Tony, the manager, gave her a peck when he saw her and said she could come back to work any time. No. She’d had enough of slinging swill and dealing with the obnoxious, of stepping over the hoo
Like it! the train of life - or death
ReplyDeleteAnd the Gypsy can't say where it will go.
DeleteMysterious and intriquing! 8 points Earthling! :)
ReplyDeleteMarvin
oh i like this, it's like death but not sorrowful.
ReplyDeleteClare
This is what I was thinking as I was writing it.
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Risk big to win big - not sure I would have had the courage to step on
ReplyDeleteTM
Ah, this is just wonderful! So true, with every life change and decision there is a certain amount of risk. I just love the direction you took this week, and that you wrote a poem to boot!!! :D
ReplyDeleteThe original idea was a story, but I just couldn't get it to jell. So, I fell back to four line stanzas.
DeleteBeautifully rendered...
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful direction to have gone :) xo
I really liked this one. Kind of mysterious.
ReplyDeletecool
ReplyDeletewhat a great finish Christopher ... it leaves more questions than answers... loved it pal...
ReplyDeleteDarn these gypsies are prolific this week. Yours is especially cryptic. I like it!
ReplyDeleteIt's the tea leaves. They are supposed to be bearers of the future.
DeleteKind of fun, though.
It speaks volumes. Great write.
ReplyDelete--DJ