Spiked
Maggie was confused and alone.
Everything around her was spinning. Steam rose from the pavement across the
street. Halos formed around the streetlights and they pulsed in her
sight.
They were a curious design. Copied from a 19th
century photograph, they became a symbol for a developer’s dream, to turn this
former steel mill into a bustling urban center. It took 18 years, and the first
two buildings opened to great fanfare. The scene looked like the stage
set for “Rent”. But to Maggie, it had become a nightmare.
She was slumped against the apartment
building. All she could remember was dancing with that spiky red haired
chick disco in Buckhead. The one that looked like it had been imported from ....Brazil.....she
guessed. Loud music and perfumed bodies surrounded her as the
music pulsed and throbbed. Boys as girls and girls as boys jumping and
bumping with the beat. Was it really a
girl? She felt a hand brushing against
her shoulder. Then everything went
black. Did someone spike her drink? She was usually so careful
about that. Checking her clothes, it didn’t seem she’d been raped. Everything
was dry and intact.
Struggling to her feet, she stumbled
down the sidewalk towards the fake arch in the middle of the street. How
had she gotten to Atlantic Station? As her eyes focused, she looked down
at her watch. It was gone as well as her purse. Not surprising. She came up to a storefront that had a digital
clock. 4:26AM. was it still Saturday? She fought the nausea. A man
was walking on the other side of the street towards the bridge. She
thought about waving at him, but decided against it. Something told her she needed to get out of
where she was. But she really didn’t know how to do it.
A loud crash came from behind.
She jumped back and turned. There was an old guy tearing up the sidewalk.
He had scars all down his arm and looked like he had just escaped from a
prison.
“Who are you, and what have you done
to my home?” He yelled. “My Daddy and Granddaddy worked damn
hard to build that place so’s we could walk to work. And you Yuppie scum
tore it all down. I am going to make you pay for that, whore!”
The man started towards Maggie.
Maggie ran towards the large IKEA
sign at the end of the block, thinking it she might be able find sanctuary in
this most holy of material providers. She didn’t make it that far. The
old man grabbed her by the collar and threw her into the reflecting pond at the
base of the arch. Maggie began to panic. Was he coming in after
her? She never could swim. Visions
of her mother warning about strangers came to her. A white light shone to her
right. She went left.
Her flailing arms caught the side of
the pond and she drug herself out. The crazed old man was gone. Had
he been a dream? She hailed a taxi, and headed towards home.
At least she was alive.
Intriguing...more to come?
ReplyDeleteOn Maggie? Maybe. The draft this came from was either the third or fourth Blogophilia story I submitted. Boy, did it take a lot of work to bring it up to snuff.
ReplyDeleteMaggie herself is pretty interesting. A party girl who constantly gets into trouble. I knew a lot of them in the late 1970's and early 1980's and not all of them are still here. She's kind of a combination of all of them.
I'm soooooo behind on all my reads. Great write as always Christopher.
ReplyDeleteI'm with Steven. More please
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