Ring (Blogophilia 22.5)


The image in the mirror beckons you
What the French call Errance awaits
Hair of honey flows downward
Goth Girl transformed
By her love saying
Only: Ah, you
Shouldn’t have
The ring
Shines

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  1. Colleen Keller BreuningJuly 23, 2012 at 9:37 PM

    Wow, great imagery in this short poem! Love it... and I'm very impressed. I am completely stumped this week, you made it look easy!!! :D

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    1. Another Government EmployeeJuly 23, 2012 at 9:40 PM

      I was worried how it was going to come together. I'm anti vanity and anti everything the fashion industry promotes. Then I saw a woman I know who doesn't realize how pretty she is and it went from there.

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  2. StevenJuly 23, 2012 at 10:52 PM

    I love the image of the tough goth betraying her outer toughness and gushing.

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  3. AnonymousJuly 23, 2012 at 11:59 PM

    I say this is gave so many images and impressions in such a short write! The power of the pyramid is more potent upside down! 8 points Earthling! :)
    Marvin

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  4. AnonymousJuly 24, 2012 at 5:08 AM

    Love at its pinacle

    TM

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  5. sueJuly 24, 2012 at 8:51 AM

    this is a most wonderful poem --excellent job

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