Friday, December 11, 2015

First Line Friday

I thought I would join in this week.

This is a project of  Jolene Naylor, and gives the reader a chance to see works in progress.

This one is from a three part serial story I wrote several years ago, Streetlights. I am the process of consolidating the parts into a single piece.


Damn, the cramps were starting again. Kari hated driving with them.  As the muscles tightened, it reminded her of her boss. “Charlie Cramps”. A fitting nickname, she thought.  Only he was messy and a pain 24/7, not just once a month and a tampon in the mouth didn’t shut him up.  



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