Monday, July 23, 2012

Ring (Blogophilia 22.5)


The image in the mirror beckons you
What the French call Errance awaits
Hair of honey flows downward
Goth Girl transformed
By her love saying
Only: Ah, you
Shouldn’t have
The ring
Shines

8 comments:

  1. Wow, great imagery in this short poem! Love it... and I'm very impressed. I am completely stumped this week, you made it look easy!!! :D

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    1. I was worried how it was going to come together. I'm anti vanity and anti everything the fashion industry promotes. Then I saw a woman I know who doesn't realize how pretty she is and it went from there.

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  2. I love the image of the tough goth betraying her outer toughness and gushing.

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  3. I say this is gave so many images and impressions in such a short write! The power of the pyramid is more potent upside down! 8 points Earthling! :)
    Marvin

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  4. Love at its pinacle

    TM

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  5. this is a most wonderful poem --excellent job

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