Jackson and Murrray (Blogophilia 31.7)
“So, lift me up, Walt.” The skinny black detective with the
graying hair shouted as he approached the body, ever present Starbucks cup
in his hand.
Murray winced. With his extended jaw line, Willie Jackson always
reminded him of a jackass, his braying voice always saying something
inappropriate. At lunch he would chomp on corn on the cob with his flat teeth. Chomp. Chomp. He thought about giving him a feedbag for
Christmas on year, but chickened out the last minute. He brushed the memory
aside and looked down at his notebook.
“Not much here that
will do that, as usual.” Scratching an itch with his pen, he continued. “We
have a well-ventilated ‘banger about 20 with no I.D. There isn’t a lot of blood,
so he was probably dumped and probably not that long ago. The little Vietnamese
guy in Diaz’s car found him coming home from work. Interesting thing, he might
be connected to the hooker we pulled out of here.”
Jackson’s eyebrows raised with the cup.
“How you making the connection?”
“’Bella Paloma’ tattoo
on his neck, and it is done in the same script.”
“How do you like them apples?” Jackson rubbed his jaw. “All
this time we thought that was her street name. Maybe this part of something
bigger. So, where do we start?”
“Well, Crime Scene is almost done processing. Get a briefing
then start canvassing. I’d start with this building on the left. They had the
best view of the proceedings. I have Diaz up at the Laundromat at the top of the hill to check for video. There was also a receipt
from the convenience store at I-85 that needs to be run down. Meanwhile, I still need to talk to our 911
caller.” He started toward the cruiser,
then he turned back towards his partner.
“Oh,guess who I think I saw in the onlookers? Remember that
psycho kid that burned up his Mama and Cousin years ago when we were in
Dekalb?”
“Jeremy Allen? How could I forget? I thought he was still in
the nuthouse. Little bastard bit the hell out of me after I asked him why don’t
you do right. Never saw so much hate in one set of eyes ever. He’d be what? 24,
25 by now? Wonder what he was doing here?”
“Hell if I know. Maybe he lives around here.” Murray tapped
his notebook with his pen. “He beat feet quick when he saw me, though. He was
in an older Toyota, similar to the one described in the hooker case. It will be
something we’ll need to check out, but I don’t think this is his style.”
“Didn’t Mama castrate him or something?” Jackson visibly
shuddered.“That would make somebody
angry enough to lash out at women.”
“Yeah, according to the relatives, she thought he was going
straight to hell and his cousin and didn’t want any more spawn. Anyway, let me
talk to Mr. Ngyuen, and see what he has to say and we’ll follow up on ol’ Jeremy
later. Poor guy’s been here a long
time.”
Bella Paloma....must be a connection, since that is really all they have to go on! Too bad Jeremy was recognized, cops always go for a previously bad person when they have the chance....not that Jeremy is good now! LOL I really am liking this story!
ReplyDelete8 points Earthling! :)
Marvin
Heh.Yeah, this will throw a wrench into the plans, for sure.
DeleteWoah, I didn't know Jeremy was castrated! You have new twists coming into this story all the time, I'm lovin' it!
ReplyDeleteI've thrown hints in a couple of prior episodes. Mama was worse than anybody really knows.
DeleteWell, you certainly have me squirming with this chapter...
ReplyDeleteMentioning that subject usually makes men squirm.
DeleteJeremy looks like a likely suspect...I love your "flatfoot style dialogue" it us very real and flows. ..great story telling...makes one want to keep turning the "pages" ;-)
ReplyDeleteYeah...I have had this project boiling for a couple of years now. The plot road has taken a couple of twists I haven't expected, which is cool.
DeleteSome good writing here. Is this going into a book? it certainly makes for interesting reading.
ReplyDeleteIt started as a novel project. I'd been toying with the concept for about two years and then finally decided to try it as a serial story. It has been an experience.
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