Bonfire (Blogophilia 51.6)
Another log on the bonfire
As they cuddled under his cloak
She knew where it was going
He knew how far.
He said: "I want to hold your hand"
And he adorned it with a star.
"Will you marry me and be my wife?"
Her face reflected that star
"I would love nothing better from life."
So many years gone by now
Joy and pain
Stitches in time
On their tapestry
Etched their faces
Under a cloak
As they face the bonfire.
FRIST!!
ReplyDeleteAnd wow, this is a romantic piece. Lovely work... -David II
Thank you. And congrats on the firsting.
DeleteFIRST! Haha, I love when that happens!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful tribute to enduring love, and just in time for Valentine's Day. 8 romantic points, Earthling!
-Marvin Martian
Thank you, Sir. Now, I've got to get the guesses.
DeleteWhaaaaaat? David BEET me as Blogspot was giving me a hard time in commenting. Dang!
ReplyDelete-Marvin
Just slow?
DeleteSomething about enduring love that is always moving
ReplyDeletegreat use of stitch prompt - yep yep
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful...I like the idea that they're weaving their life tapestry together.
ReplyDeleteUltimately, you do. Kathryn and I have been married almost 29 years and I can see the passage in her face.
DeleteSweet!
ReplyDeleteIrene
Very romantic .. Yeah .. :)
ReplyDeleteBettie
Very beautiful!
ReplyDeleteMichelle K
Precious and poignant. I love it!
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