A Lonely Bird (Blogophilia 40.6)
In a dream I was a bird
A sad, lonely mourning pigeon
On a flowering gargoyle
Fearing beauty
All was ugliness to me.
Eyes closed to the light
Only grey I see
Rain off the branches
Running down my back
Every day was just black.
Picture: "One Lonely Bird" (c) 2012 http://widdendream.deviantart.com/.
Joy is Sorrow's negative
Fears go with dreams.
That is your lesson for the day.
I scanned deviantart.com after I googled Widdendream, almost went with that option but the straight line called louder
ReplyDeleteNicely done
There were several with that handle, but I liked this one the best.
DeleteWay to work in "widdendream"! Wonderful poem, btw!
ReplyDeleteJay
On a flowering gargoyle... love the image -- good write
ReplyDeleteAmazing write Christopher..
ReplyDeleteyour words are indeed a great leveller of feelings..
a fantasy with grief and emotion... very deep...
Brilliant!! :-)
Tragically sad ... very emotive Christopher.
ReplyDeleteWhen I saw the picture and the picture of the artist, it moved me.
DeleteLove when you write poems! This is perfect!
ReplyDeleteIrene
Perfect analogy of the prompts and an excellent poem too!
ReplyDelete8 points Earthling! :)
Marvin
Feeling the sadness. Eloquent indeed.
ReplyDeleteMan, talk about a low point in an otherwise dismal day...
ReplyDeleteStill, I enjoyed this immensely. Melancholy is my game.
signed: Myke