Sun Rises (Blogophilia 5.5)
Sun rises
High in the sky
Gorgeous day
A new day,
Modern Modonna
Takes her lover.
SheTakes it to the
Limit, pauses
Twists around
Encompassing view
Breath taken away.
Spent
Like the blossoms
around them.
Already in seed.
This is my psychiatrist's couch. Take from it what you will. But do leave a note. I usually reply. My name is Christopher Mitchell and my internet handle is “Another Government Employee” An aging late boomer who wonders why life passed him by. Short Fiction, Doggerel and Insensitive Opinion are spoken here. Every time you comment, an angel gets its wings. If you like what you see, please follow and share.
Beautiful poem Christopher.... Loving the imagery here, just exquisite!
ReplyDeleteThank you. When I was looking at the video, the sun imagery just popped out.
Deleteok I was going to say the same about the imagery - so that tells you that it's a beautiful word painting
ReplyDeleteSome great imagery - loved "Modern Modonna" especially.
ReplyDeleteTM
It was the first thing I thought of with the pic.
DeleteFantastic! I find it very interesting as to what inspires the poems I read each week. Well done Sir! 8 points Earthling! :)
ReplyDeleteMarvin
I read the poem and then watched the video. Brilliant take on the vid and your images convey so much more! Cool!
ReplyDeleteNissmech
here is your creamsicle - is that all you could say??
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CFuP1Yfid9U&feature=fvst
sounds good - make me one too please
A change of pace from you, lovely! Sallon
ReplyDeleteLovely piece! kismet
ReplyDeleteI too looked at the video first Christopher ... I love choirs so much... then your words put the icing on that cake for me... lots of things to envisage when reading your wordage ... loved it.. loved the experience...
ReplyDeleteYour poem and the video were the perfect quiet moment I enjoyed this morning while drinking my cup of tea! Perfect being the best way to describe this week's post!
ReplyDeleteJoanie