tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post8923103149505865838..comments2024-03-22T21:02:14.525-04:00Comments on A.G.E's Joint: Battery Point (Blogophilia 22.8)Another Government Employeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-30954329928400021692015-07-27T21:34:25.768-04:002015-07-27T21:34:25.768-04:00Thank you very much. Please feel free to browse th...Thank you very much. Please feel free to browse the blog and enjoy. Currently have 300 or so pieces to enjoy.<br />Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-38151330723072937492015-07-27T21:28:31.941-04:002015-07-27T21:28:31.941-04:00I just happened upon this piece. Excellent; very ...I just happened upon this piece. Excellent; very well writtenPatty MacFarlanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10652046504152629535noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-48174786057149633962015-07-25T12:54:32.445-04:002015-07-25T12:54:32.445-04:00Your writing just keeps getting better and better....Your writing just keeps getting better and better. This is so believable . Great writing sir<br />StormyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-66550569866581756622015-07-25T07:47:42.974-04:002015-07-25T07:47:42.974-04:00That was what I was going for. Thanks.That was what I was going for. Thanks.Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-38187679520862654152015-07-24T22:39:42.042-04:002015-07-24T22:39:42.042-04:00Very visceral - feeling both their pain
TMVery visceral - feeling both their pain<br /><br />TMAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-37652434018556984082015-07-24T04:45:29.807-04:002015-07-24T04:45:29.807-04:00Maybe. But she trusts nothing enough to find out. ...Maybe. But she trusts nothing enough to find out. Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-43972363892643399922015-07-23T22:48:01.814-04:002015-07-23T22:48:01.814-04:00Every man reminds her of him? Maybe she still lov...Every man reminds her of him? Maybe she still loves him. <br /><br />IreneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-56492377457631138562015-07-23T21:57:16.375-04:002015-07-23T21:57:16.375-04:00I've always liked dialogue as a character deve...I've always liked dialogue as a character development tool. It's a way to get into their heads quickly. Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-24428098860050978672015-07-23T21:41:24.077-04:002015-07-23T21:41:24.077-04:00I always enjoy your dialogue...it really paints su...I always enjoy your dialogue...it really paints such a clear picture of your characters!! ~Christine W.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-2282844732611876702015-07-23T11:56:23.201-04:002015-07-23T11:56:23.201-04:00Thank you so much, Barbara.Thank you so much, Barbara.Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-15480630615986544252015-07-23T11:33:31.299-04:002015-07-23T11:33:31.299-04:00Very nice write! :)
~~DJVery nice write! :)<br /><br />~~DJDiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03138774193287041214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-40689691470841348692015-07-23T11:00:37.838-04:002015-07-23T11:00:37.838-04:00As though I'm right there as I read. Wonderfu...As though I'm right there as I read. Wonderful storytelling!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15102086160370234236noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-48319209096647208532015-07-23T04:45:27.755-04:002015-07-23T04:45:27.755-04:00Thank you, Sir. Most of us have been here. Thank you, Sir. Most of us have been here. Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-64262726016523124822015-07-23T01:51:48.298-04:002015-07-23T01:51:48.298-04:00He seemed forever the pessimist until he met up w...He seemed forever the pessimist until he met up with her and then his optimistic, hopeful side tipped the bucket over. Well written; well done! <br /><br />8 points Earthling! :)<br /><br />MarvinAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-47177344496603893142015-07-22T21:58:52.364-04:002015-07-22T21:58:52.364-04:00great story with tons of imagery, ending leaves us...great story with tons of imagery, ending leaves us wanting more Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07496297447419565994noreply@blogger.com