tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post4677658824845774898..comments2024-03-22T21:02:14.525-04:00Comments on A.G.E's Joint: Debbie (Blogohphlia 4.6)Another Government Employeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-69636055663669889382017-04-27T13:03:47.197-04:002017-04-27T13:03:47.197-04:00There used to be a billboard advertising "Dri...There used to be a billboard advertising "Drive up Divorce-$499", like it was a discount paint job or something. Kind of miss that. Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-90453309352878326602017-04-02T21:33:14.707-04:002017-04-02T21:33:14.707-04:00We usually just put up with the pain for years...t...We usually just put up with the pain for years...the hammer is so final and blood so hard to clean.<br /><br />I think it should be possible to get a divorce from a vending machine. Or maybe some kind of untraceable poison. Either/or. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-71087502106133430112013-03-24T03:23:38.545-04:002013-03-24T03:23:38.545-04:00Wow...this had such a wonderful "sinister&quo...Wow...this had such a wonderful "sinister" kind of feel to it and yet...you have me --the reader--rooting for her. Hey! She was wronged and justice was "served"...maybe with a hammer--not quite by the "legal route"...but...done is done! I like the way you ended the tale...leaves one to imagine where it will "go" from there. Loved it! DemmeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-65272724598122033922013-03-22T14:56:56.618-04:002013-03-22T14:56:56.618-04:00awesome readawesome readliamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12593479340932051937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-54365899323027076792013-03-21T20:29:06.380-04:002013-03-21T20:29:06.380-04:00Oh wow, this is riveting, Christopher!!! I so want...Oh wow, this is riveting, Christopher!!! I so want to know what comes of this most unusual pairing.... but I'm getting a gut feeling it's not going to be a good outcome. I vote for another chapter!!! :DColleen Keller Breuninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08736334202387070432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-48529897481136712072013-03-20T02:29:04.450-04:002013-03-20T02:29:04.450-04:00this is brilliant.. I was totally engrossed in the...this is brilliant.. I was totally engrossed in the first few lines Christopher.... <br />the description of the security Chuck is perfect and so vivid... I laughed at the ginger haired comb over ... ahahah..<br />but the whole story is compelling, and the possibilities of Debbie's actions are mind blowing indeed...<br />you can't leave it there Christopher.. you got to give us more pal... <br />its such a great story line... loved it... quite brilliant!! <br /> trevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968692189967242629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-56717263199689999572013-03-19T16:51:22.325-04:002013-03-19T16:51:22.325-04:00Both survive, although alone, to fight and love an...Both survive, although alone, to fight and love another day. Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-15207714149500532242013-03-19T12:01:19.242-04:002013-03-19T12:01:19.242-04:008 points, Earthling!! A chilling tale, we'd li...8 points, Earthling!! A chilling tale, we'd like to know how it comes out. Or should we live it to our imagination? <br /><br />MarvinAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-74316834978732206742013-03-19T11:18:10.294-04:002013-03-19T11:18:10.294-04:00Excellent your descriptions are definitely improvi...Excellent your descriptions are definitely improving I particularly liked the first paragraph. I don't know the song you mentioned.suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-38179467058969207032013-03-19T06:22:36.063-04:002013-03-19T06:22:36.063-04:00
Two enter - only one leaves?? I think it needs an...<br />Two enter - only one leaves?? I think it needs another chapter to find out<br /><br />TMAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-47231083685143729892013-03-18T22:10:05.699-04:002013-03-18T22:10:05.699-04:00Thanks. Yes and no (if you know the song). Thanks. Yes and no (if you know the song). Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-2201079409368752992013-03-18T21:59:32.107-04:002013-03-18T21:59:32.107-04:00Hahaha Oh man, I see no good coming from this hook...Hahaha Oh man, I see no good coming from this hookup. But he was informed she was married, even though "separated," and decided to proceed. Bad move... But excellent suspense! -David IIAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-55468378832913611832013-03-18T21:41:26.940-04:002013-03-18T21:41:26.940-04:00The song has always haunted me a little. Why was t...The song has always haunted me a little. Why was the lady so lonely? Another Government Employeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11736588211704245188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7401650282965570676.post-56165243989934431112013-03-18T21:30:10.182-04:002013-03-18T21:30:10.182-04:00Ohhhh.... I got shivers on my goosebumps with the ...Ohhhh.... I got shivers on my goosebumps with the subtle of the hammer! Well done!sharonleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13606000428878000878noreply@blogger.com